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:iconsnakegirlshilach:
she is very cute x3 Love the markings she has and the colours and alos the dark on the front paw,but too bad you didn't put alot of effort in shading :( It would be much better if you would shade it x3 body is very nice BUT something is not right ! the left front paw should be atleast a bit visible it looks like she doesn't has a second front paw x3 but for the rest its very cute ^^ just the fornt paw and the shading would make it much better thats what I think ,hope you like the critique
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:iconspottehthepiemonster:
thanks for the crit, i'll keep those points in mind, i think im going to upload an edited vertion later. Its good to get feedback this quickly, thanks! :3

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:iconsnakegirlshilach:
sounds awesome and np ^^ glad you like the critique ^^

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